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h~e~a~t
(t’s groove)
your words fill the windowsill like africa’s noon day sun
and i curl up in them, stretching like a content cat they hug me - those words of yours - as if it were their sole purpose, they pull me into a kiss that defies description i laugh as you say i’m the soul that passed you by when in actuality, i can’t pass what i’m connected to i am your first memory, your last dream - your waking reality in a past life we ran over the plains of the Serengeti you promising me the stars…and delivering them one by one you wrap strong arms around me, you lick every vowel in my name, your words lift me, tease me, tempt me… as i sink further into the tenderness of you
i gently bite your shoulder
your hand rests in the small of my back
as you press poetry deeper into me
i quiver, burying my head in your shoulder
you dare me to look into your eyes
as you feed me an aphrodisiac of your words
heavily dusted with matching actions
and i find myself lost in a heat so delicious, i feel its imprint in my soul
you speak… we ride
we crest we relax in the afterglow of a mindgasm so powerful we feel tremors days later i snuggle deeper into the comfort of you fitting myself into the heat of your left side, the place from which i was birthed with one hand over your heart
and the other caressing your left side
i coyly ask… “was i worth the rib Baby?” copyright 2007 ~ Jackie Young
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Single Ma said…
OH SHYT! OH SHYT! Now I’m gonna be on the plane thinking about this all morning.
Somebody done started something now. LOL YOU. MUST. CALL. ME!!
Mindgasm…hmm, VERY nice.
4:03 AM, March 28, 2007
MsJayy said…
LOL As my nephew would say when he KNEW he was in trouble, “Huh? What I do?” :O) Yep…”mindgasm”. Actually started to call the poem “Mindgasm” but I felt that would have given it away. My favorite line is the last one “Was I worth the rib Baby?”. Hehehehehe.
Oh, & trust me - we’ll talk. Have a safe flight! Don’t hurt nobody. Well, not with witnesses. ROFL
6:28 AM, March 28, 2007
CreoleInDC said…
Um…guess you had a good trip??????????
LOL!
10:03 AM, March 28, 2007
MsJayy said…
Ha! I wish! Girl, if it had been THAT kind of trip I’d be typing this from ATL. ROFL
10:12 AM, March 28, 2007
Anonymous said…
All that from a trip to ATL? Interesting. Que voce e que voce?
Nick
11:07 AM, March 28, 2007
Always.Funky.Fresh said…
Worth the rib?!?!? Shiiiiiiiiii….
Ribs, eyes, heart, nostrils..take it all…LOL
Amazing how the mind relaxes when it’s not at home.
11:25 AM, March 28, 2007
Shai said…
Jackie, Jackie, Jackie. That joint was fired up hot. LOL.
I brought your poetry book to work to inspire me cause I am on down time until next week. I read a few pieces and paused to contain myself. Then what to I see but this piece and you blow me out the water. LOL.
12:47 PM, March 28, 2007
Anonymous said…
eye c u
eye hear u
and eye luv feelin’ u!
Everybody knows that you can’t have potato salad, Corn on da Cobb and chili beans without some hot & juicy JY ribs.
t
1:09 PM, March 28, 2007
MsJayy said…
Nick…ENGLISH BRUH! Say it in English. The answer is nothing & no one…yet. LOL Where you been?
Fresh - ROFL take it all huh? LOL And for the record, I was home when this was created. Just had a little extra incentive. :O)
Shai - thanks. every now & then i like to blow it out ya know? It did ring a little heat with it, huh? LOL
2:31 PM, March 28, 2007
MsJayy said…
T - r u sure about that? I suppose I can take your statement as a ‘yes’ to my question huh? *wink*
2:34 PM, March 28, 2007
Anonymous said…
*wink*
t
4:06 PM, March 28, 2007
princessdominique said…
*eyes wide*
*dizzy spin*
*swoon*
*collapse*
4:09 PM, March 28, 2007
MsJayy said…
LOL - Girl you crazy! LOL
Told you that last line was killa. Dang I love that line!!!! Oh, that one and the two I “borrowed” from…a muse….*giggle*
4:46 PM, March 28, 2007
Peggy said…
Now MsJayy,
Don’t you know it is a crime to yell fire in a crowded theatre???
Dang!!!
11:27 PM, March 28, 2007
MsJayy said…
Heyyyyy Ms. Peggy!! *waving fanatically* I just followed the Muse. You know I have no control over where we go or how we get there. LOL
2:12 AM, March 29, 2007
Awwww. Nice ending! (in my girlie voice! lol)
LOL Thanks! I was in my “rib-writing” phase.